aoifene: (draco)
[personal profile] aoifene
Title: Tell me
Collaborators: Aoife [livejournal.com profile] aoifene (author) and Reira [livejournal.com profile] reira_21 (artist)
Pairing(s): Harry/Draco
Rating: PG
Word Count:1,623
Art Panels: 2
Fic Beta: My lovely [livejournal.com profile] jamie2109
Disclaimer: All Harry Potter characters herein are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No copyright infringement is intended.
Warning: Second POV. Present tense.
AN: I have always greatly admired my dear friend, [livejournal.com profile] reira_21’s art and we decided that it would be fun to do a collaboration. This little vignette is the result of that. We actually worked on this a year ago and it is only now that we’ve remembered to post it. *is sheepish* I do hope you enjoy!
Summary: The truth is a terrible and beautiful thing.


The door crashes behind you and the rambunctious noise of the bar cuts through the night air, disturbing the steady sound of pouring rain. Mercifully, the door slams again – shut this time – and silence settles once more. The soft hiss of raindrops hitting glass panes is the only thing that’s audible.

However, tension now fills the space where peace had been before.

You don’t turn. You already know the sight that will meet your eyes. Can already see the tint of angry red dusting those tan cheeks and the emerald fire alight in those eyes.

An ordinary man would tremble at the thought of being the cause of the Boy Who Lived’s ire. But you’ve been doing it since you were eleven so you aren’t particularly bothered. However, there is now the matter of your friendship with him to think about and even the idle thought of losing it causes your chest to tighten in a way you can’t explain.

It gives you pause from lifting the lit cigarette to your lips.



“Why didn’t you tell me?”

You stiffen a little at that. After all, you guard many secrets but none that could cause the misery and anger colouring his voice, at least not anymore. Except maybe…but no, how could he? You haven’t even told Pansy and you tell her everything. You’ve barely managed to acknowledge it to yourself.

“Tell you what, Harry?” You turn ever so slightly, your head cocked curiously to the side. Your eyes meet green and your lips twitch when you see that you are correct. Right down to the spot of red blooming on his flushed cheeks. Really, your knowledge of him is sometimes scary. Obsessive even but that’s not something you like to think about. You take another drag of the cigarette, letting the sharp tang of nicotine and smoke chase away that errant thought.

“You knew she wasn’t the right one for me. In fact, Ron just told me how loudly and adamantly you listed all of the reasons why Ginny and I wouldn’t work out to everyone who could hear you during our wedding reception. He actually told me that you’d be the first one to say ‘I told you so’. Except you haven’t.”

He steps forward, his fists clenching even as his eyes dim with sadness. “Why? You were never shy of telling me your opinions before. In fact, I remember you liked yelling it in my face.”

The swiftness of incredulity rushes through you and it almost makes you gape. Almost. You settle for a snort instead, flicking away the remnants of your cigarette. You have no use for it now that bitterness is filling your mouth and coating your tongue, making it the only flavour you can taste. “And I must’ve forgotten how much you liked that. Have you missed my boyhood rants about Mudbloods? Perhaps the times where I encapsulated how very right my father was to follow the Dark Lord? Or better yet–“

“That’s not what I meant and you know it.” He growls as he catches your wrist tightly.

“Why didn’t you tell me?” A streak of lightning steals through the sky, catching his stricken expression and his hurt is so palpable, you feel a twinge in your heart at the sight of it.

“Potter–“ You sneer, the proximity of his warmth has you scrambling for more familiar ground, even if it stopped being familiar years ago. “This is the question that has you barrelling through bars at two in the morning? Shouldn’t you be in there getting pissed on Ogden’s and asking the one about your marriage ending instead?”

He isn’t thrown by either tactic and you feel his grip tighten on your wrist a little more. “That question has already been answered, mine has not.” His gaze bears down on yours.

You turn your head, breaking the eye contact. “There is nothing to tell. You married your girlfriend, broke thousands of hearts and at the same time fulfilled the public’s expectations. How could anything I said about it have made any difference? It wasn’t anything you hadn’t heard before, especially since you decided to wed her less than a year after defeating the Dark Lord and within mere days of reuniting with her.”

“It would have been different and you knew it.” He grits his teeth.

“No, Potter. I didn’t.” You tug at your wrist, testing his grip and cursing him when it holds. “And I honestly don’t see how. We were barely even friends then and I was fresh off parole. Besides, as I’ve said, it wouldn’t have been any different from what had already been said.” You shrug. “Or maybe whispered would be the better term.” You arch an eyebrow. “You deserved better than what you settled for.”

“I didn’t know I was settling,” He says softly, his eyes downcast. “I thought I loved her.” He shakes his head, resentment resonating in his words. “You should have told me. Maybe then I wouldn’t be going through this! What happened, Draco? You were always the one who told me the plain truth, even when we hated each other, and the second I actually needed it, you withheld it from me.”



Indignation fills you before he even finishes the accusation and you just barely manage to refrain from doing something as undignified as spluttering. He’s holding you responsible for this fiasco? For the broken hearted look on his face? You use his own hold against him to bring him forward, crushing his chest to yours. “Your marriage ended and you’re blaming me?” Your body is trembling from anger and it’s all you can do not to hit him. His idiocy apparently knows no bounds. “Is that what I am to you? An outlet for your frustration? Some poor sod to blame when you make your own mistakes?” You don’t raise your voice. Not when you’re this angry. It all comes out in a whisper. A soft exhalation of sound, coolly tempered as though hardened steel.

“No! That isn’t what I meant and you know it. You’re changing the bloody subject. That isn’t–“

“Then what is it? What has you coming here in the middle of the night throwing questions like accusations?” You shake him in frustration. “I’ll always be a bastard to you, won’t I? Nothing I do will ever erase that.”

“Now you’re just hacking me off by putting words in my mouth,” He snaps, his ire returning. “I just want to know why the fuck you held your tongue on this when nothing else ever shut you up. Didn’t you– I don’t know…” He lets out an explosive sigh as he turns away, his arms wrap around his middle protectively, “…care?”

The sheer ridiculousness of his question throws you off. So much so that you’re looking at him with wide eyes for the better part of a minute, and that’s when the resentment you’ve always fought off finds its hold. “You were in love with her.” You tilt your head up to the dark sky so you won't have to see his face, knowing he heard the helpless jealously in your words. “Is it really so hard to believe that I would want that to work out for you?”

“S-so you did care.” The words are tinged with a sort of tentative triumph that has your shoulders slumping in exasperation. The man really has a one-track mind.

“I do,” you admit quietly and then before you think better of it the words are out before you can stop them. “I tried hard not to.” You drop your eyes, feeling the vulnerability already creeping in from that little confession. Your mind frantically tries to come up with plausible ways to escape the situation but a gentle nudge of your shoulder derails all thought.

“Me too.” He looks away, leaving you to stare after him in suspicion but when he turns back his eyes are filled with something fierce, sharp like anger and strong like fear. You’ve never seen such an expression on his face before and you’re pretty sure you’ve been able to evoke every emotion in the spectrum. Both of you may be a lot of things to each other but apathetic has never been one of them.

You feel yourself weaken under such intensity.

Could it be? But no– it couldn’t. He is more oblivious than you are, and there just isn’t any possible way that he could be thinking of–

“Why didn’t you tell me?”

The way he asks it now is different, devoid of indignant anger. His voice is but a whisper, a gentle prompting, as though you are a skittish horse he doesn't want to frighten. And you try not to think of how very fitting that imagery is.

Your attempt at nonchalance dies on your lips at the weight of his stare. Your mouth dries as your mind reels at the possibility of what he’s asking and your heart beats faster with the thought of the only answer you want to give.

But can you?

You’ve done this before, offered him something he didn’t want. It could happen again. What if you’ve misinterpreted his words? Misunderstood his meaning? What if you did this once more, this time laying something infinitely more precious at his feet, only to have it end the same way?

The rain has come to a stop, just like time has and you are caught again in a defining moment. It is only when the clock restarts and keeps on ticking and he is still silent that it hits you.

You’re not the only one holding your breath.

You exhale deeply. Eyes finally falling open…and clear.

“Harry, there’s something I need to tell you.”

Finite.


We hope you enjoyed it. Comments and feedback are as always ♥ and greatly appreciated.
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Date: 2010-09-10 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lonewhiterose.livejournal.com
O__O Oh my god, hon! That was amazing!! What a gorgeous fic, and lovely art to go with it!
Thanks so much for sharing, I really enjoyed this ♥

Date: 2010-09-13 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
I'm delighted you enjoyed this! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

Date: 2010-09-10 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] creme-bun.livejournal.com
Sometimes two things fit together perfectly. This fic and art. Harry and Draco. *nods* Perfect together.

Date: 2010-09-13 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Aww what a lovely thing to say! Thank you for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-10 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jamie2109.livejournal.com
Oh, holy crap I have missed your particular brand of hurt. You know just how to prick at my heart until it is bleeding all over the place and then leave me lying there not healed but knowing that it will be. Gorgeous story, my love and incredible art to go with it. ♥ so glad you're back!

Date: 2010-09-13 02:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Thanks, darling! I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Angst with a silver lining is apparently all I can manage most of the time! *laughs* ♥ How can I leave when you're here? :D

Date: 2010-09-10 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] franalan.livejournal.com
That's gorgeous. The fic and the art ♥

Date: 2010-09-13 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Aww glad you thought so! Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

Date: 2010-09-10 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Beautiful, hon. Such gorgeous imagery - both in the words and the art. I adore the sparseness of this - so much not said, but nonetheless felt. ♥

Welcome back!

Date: 2010-09-13 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
IMHO, I think the thing with 2nd POV is that it has to be sparse in order for it to work. Otherwise, it gets confusing and other things get in the way of the emotion you're trying to get through. I'm delighted you liked it and thought it worked!

Thanks! It's good to be back! I've miss you all! ♥
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Date: 2010-09-13 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm delighted you enjoyed it and yes, Reira's work is amazing, no matter what genre! :)

Date: 2010-09-10 11:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ura-hd.livejournal.com
Great story! Beautiful art! Loved it!!!

Date: 2010-09-13 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

Date: 2010-09-11 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] serilla.livejournal.com
Wow!......What can I say....the art the story......just totally wonderful. :)

Date: 2010-09-13 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Thank you for the praise! I am delighted you enjoyed it! :)

Date: 2010-09-11 12:24 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] besamislabios
Oh wow... that was beautiful, so full of emotion. The art is gorgeous too, and goes perfectly with your words.

Wonderful collaboration. ♥

Date: 2010-09-13 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
It was certainly a wonderful experience working on this collab so I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

re: Tell me

Date: 2010-09-11 01:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] vaysh11
What an utterly unique way to have Harry and Draco declare their love for each other. The idea that Harry would be hurt and angry about Draco not telling him how he really felt about Harry marrying Ginny - this is an awesome, even Epilogue compliant angle to H/D that rings quite true to me. I love how Harry expects that Draco tells him the truth, I love the reasons why Draco in this case could not tell him. Wonderfully done.

Reira's smoking Draco has stolen my heart long ago, and this rendering of him is gorgeous. And Harry, wow - what wild emotion and power in his hair, his frown. Simply stunning.

Thanks so much, both of you, for creating this. ♥

Re: Tell me

Date: 2010-09-13 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
I'm delighted you think it was an original telling of the ole H/D love affair. I was worried that with only giving such sparse background to the fic that the readers might get lost. I'm happy you thought it worked!

*laughs* She actually asked me to add that in the story and of course, I happily complied.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-11 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ayurubie.livejournal.com
beautiful ♥

Date: 2010-09-13 02:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2010-09-11 04:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alaana-fair.livejournal.com
So gorgeous, bb! How you can pack so much emotion in so few words astounds me.

This in particular gave me a lump in my throat...

You’ve done this before, offered him something he didn’t want. It could happen again. What if you’ve misinterpreted his words? Misunderstood his meaning? What if you did this once more, this time laying something infinitely more precious at his feet, only to have it end the same way?

God, how I love afraid to be vulnerable Draco! But then he sucked it up and you gave us a happy ending!!!! *loves all over you*

And Reira's art is always so emotional and beautiful. The fic and art really are the perfect companions!

Date: 2010-09-13 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
*laughs* I'm delighted you enjoyed it and thought it worked. I think this is something we can all relate to with Draco. This fear of taking the chance to grab something you've wanted for so long but never really thought you'd get. :) And yes, happy ending and Alaana safe! I can do it sometimes!

:D You are always too kind. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-11 07:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nenne.livejournal.com
Beautiful. Both the words and the art. So much is packed into so few words and lines.
Edited Date: 2010-09-11 07:36 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-09-13 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
:) Glad you thought the sparseness worked. Thank you for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-11 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kayoko.livejournal.com
Utterly delicious! I love the second person POV! Well done on that! There was a lot of emotion conveyed through the second person POV and just added something to the story. Wonderful!

And the art! *flails* I love love love the first one with Draco. Smoking is so not sexy but in water coloured smoke, it is! I'm going to see if it'll stretch to become a nice wallpaper. Love the end of colours and line work.

Date: 2010-09-13 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Reira and I actually have a great love for 2nd POV so I'm glad you thought it worked! And yes smoking! Draco when done by Reira is just too sexy to resist! :D

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-11 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cydciedah.livejournal.com
This is... beautiful! The words flow in the same manner as the watercolors in the art. Beautiful! Like everyone said before me: perfect fit! Love it! Thanks for posting. <3

Date: 2010-09-13 04:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed the combination of art and fic! Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

Date: 2010-09-12 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deevalish.livejournal.com
This was just so lush! The passion and the angst and the setting. Everything was amazing.

Date: 2010-09-13 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
:D That's mighty praise! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-12 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melusinahp.livejournal.com
What an absolutely perfect combination, you and Reira. You go together so well, the words complementing the art, and art making the words richer too.

Both are so beautiful, poetic, angsty and gorgeously hopeful in the end. ♥

Date: 2010-09-13 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
:D Glad you enjoyed our collaboration! It was mighty fun to do!

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

Date: 2010-09-12 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubyemerald-1.livejournal.com
Absolutely gorgeous story, gorgeous art.

Date: 2010-09-13 05:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
I'm delighted you think so! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-13 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] insaneformality.livejournal.com
Oh, I really enjoyed this. Both the fic and art are wonderful, and they work together beautfully.

Date: 2010-09-13 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] insaneformality.livejournal.com
*beautifully

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From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com - Date: 2010-09-14 04:21 am (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2010-09-13 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fancypantsdylan.livejournal.com
Absolutely gobsmacking amazing and I mean the art too ;)

Date: 2010-09-14 04:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
You're too kind. I am happy you liked it that much! Thank you for reading and commenting.

Date: 2010-09-14 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frayach.livejournal.com
What beautiful writing and beautiful artwork! You paint such a vivid picture - the first paragraph is pure poetry. And the end is perfect. Thank you so much for sharing.

*friends*

Date: 2010-09-14 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
*blushes* You are far too kind! I'm delighted you enjoyed it that much. It was really great fun to write and collab with Reira. Her gorgeous boys do much to inspire!

Thank you for reading and commenting!
*friends back*

Date: 2010-09-14 04:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adamei.livejournal.com
Ah, so beautiful, art and story alike. Thank you for sharing!

Date: 2010-09-15 04:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-14 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hpstrangelove.livejournal.com
What a return - this was fabulous. Hopeful angst is great, and the art is so sultry. You've got so much emotion packed in such few words. It's nice to know that after all this time DM/HP can still be written in a fresh way.

Date: 2010-09-15 04:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Yes, it has been awhile, hasn't it? I'm delighted you enjoyed it and think that this piece is something unique! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-14 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorac64.livejournal.com
I loved the tension, and the rain counterpoint, and the bookend irony of "Why didn't you tell me" with "There is something I have to tell you", and Harry's open vulnerability vs. Draco's hidden vulnerability, and ....so much more in this powerful ficlet. The lovely art evoked the rain and the flow of emotions. You just hit most of my buttons in 1600 words!

Date: 2010-09-15 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
I have a great love for parallelisms and duality so I'm glad you enjoyed it in this fic. Thank you for reading and commenting!

Date: 2010-09-14 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Mmmm, that's beautiful! Words and artwork, both.

Welcome back!

Date: 2010-09-15 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aoifene.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed it, hon! And see? Jae-safe!

Thanks! Are you sure you want the angst back again though? Haha
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