I loved this. The 'kill me' bit had me in tears as well. Okay! They were hiccuping sobs! But it was so sad!

The way it's written is ingenious! There were some parts where I was confused and didn't understand exactly what was going on, but it didn't take away from the story too much. Again, the way you've written it is just amazing and artful. Beautiful.

*Going to read the sequal* ^_^