Utterly delicious! I love the second person POV! Well done on that! There was a lot of emotion conveyed through the second person POV and just added something to the story. Wonderful!

And the art! *flails* I love love love the first one with Draco. Smoking is so not sexy but in water coloured smoke, it is! I'm going to see if it'll stretch to become a nice wallpaper. Love the end of colours and line work.