http://winter-peppermi.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] winter-peppermi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aoifene 2006-06-27 03:37 am (UTC)

ohmygod. I must comment. Lucius is such an ignorant, twisted bastard (and you portrayed him excellently.) And Draco's characterization was perfect! There was one line that absolutely melted me-

You have always been the axis of my world. The sun sets and rises by your will. I love you. I respect you. You will always be my father, although to you I might not always be your son.

This was like, 'cut to draco as a toddler, hugging his father's leg' (or something, although Lucius wouldn't have liked such an open show of emotion. xP)

And I loved the little slip of H/D in the end, even though I think Draco might hate him for it when he wakes up.

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