IMHO, I think the thing with 2nd POV is that it has to be sparse in order for it to work. Otherwise, it gets confusing and other things get in the way of the emotion you're trying to get through. I'm delighted you liked it and thought it worked!
Thanks! It's good to be back! I've miss you all! ♥
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Date: 2010-09-13 02:42 am (UTC)Thanks! It's good to be back! I've miss you all! ♥