I did really like this. I think you kept Lucius in character...however, even with them both reverting into French, I am fairly certain (in my humble opinion, of course), that Lucius would have rather had taken Draco to a secluded room (so as not to air out his dirty laundry in front of the school), even though his renouncing of Draco's inheritance was a good thing to be done publicly. *shrug* Other than the location, it was really great! (You should have written in a tonne of rocks falling on him. I would have Giggled With Glee. ^^
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Date: 2007-06-06 09:09 pm (UTC)